Encouragement within the book of John

Recently I read the book of John and noticed some phrases repeated. They encouraged me and I hope they’ll encourage you!

John 6:40, 44b, 54b all share the same phrase : “I will raise him up at the last day”. From this scripture, believers are assured eternal life with God the Father.

John 10:28b, 29b both share the same phrase : “no one can snatch them out of my Father’s hand.” From this scripture, believers are assured that they can not lose their salvation.

We can rest in God’s Word.

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How many storylines in a full-length novel?

Now that you’ve chosen which POV (Point of View) to use for your novel, you need to plot out what will happen during the course of your novel.

Karen Wiesner’s First Draft in 30 days discusses how many storylines to have in a full length novel. She recommends  5 to 9. It’s a great book to read and lean on if you want to finish your first book.

The key with those storylines is that they need to be inter-related. All the storylines need to come together in the end. And each scene should directly advance the story.

In a romance, you’d have two POV’s – the hero and the heroine. Each would have a romance storyline. If you were writing in CBA, they’d each have a spiritual storyline. And each character would have their main storyline. If you read a romance novel, you’ll see that their main storyline intersects at some point – making all six storylines inter-related.

Susan May Warren recommends that each scene be about 1200 to 1600 words. These days you’ll see novels that have 8 to 9 pages for each chapter. For an 80,000 word novel, that works out to 30 chapters. Two scenes for each chapter. We’ll go over storyboarding next time!

What about longer or shorter formats? Hartline Agent Terry Burns has a blurb on his website with some basic word count guidelines that might help you.

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Interview with Author Tim Downs

Tim Downs is a Phi Beta Kappa graduate of Indiana University. After graduation in 1976 he created a comic strip, Downstown, which was syndicated by Universal Press Syndicate until 1986. His cartooning has appeared in more than a hundred major newspapers worldwide. Tim has eight novels and two non-fiction titles published. His first book, a work of non-fiction, was awarded the Gold Medallion Award in 2000, and his third novel, PlagueMaker, was awarded the Christy Award for best CBA suspense novel of 2007. Tim lives in Cary, North Carolina, with his wife Joy.

Tim will be the keynote speaker for the 2010 ACFW conference in Indiana. His website allows you to read the first chapter of any of his books here.

Tim, thank you for being here today! Some people are natural born storytellers and you are one of them. I enjoy reading your stories and am looking forward to getting my hands on Wonders Never Cease soon.

1) It seems like your stories have a theme around them. Can you tell us how you plan that theme and how you write that theme into the story?

Each of my stories has a central theme, and that becomes the unifying element that ties the whole story together. Novels are so long that you can get lost in the middle of them; theme is the thing that reminds you what the story is about so you can keep from getting too far off track. My Bug Man novel First the Dead, for example, was set in New Orleans the week following Hurricane Katrina. On the surface the story is just a mystery about a bad guy who used the hurricane as a way to cover up some unpleasant business and Nick Polchak’s attempt to foil his plan. But the theme of the story is really about our spiritual impulse to search for a Father during times of suffering. That’s why I introduced the character of JT Walker, a young man who seeks Nick’s help in finding his father after the flood. That theme ties the whole book together and gives it much more meaning and depth than it would have if it were just a simple detective story.

2) Plotting. How do you plot? What do you know before you write that first chapter? Give us the trade secrets!

I’m afraid those “trade secrets” vary from author to author. Personally, I always write a “plot summary” before I ever write a word of the book. A plot summary contains one little paragraph for each chapter of the book where I briefly describe what will happen in that chapter. My plot summaries are usually about 20 pages long. I think of them like a road map. If I wanted to travel from NC to San Francisco, I might make out a list of the major landmarks along the way to keep me on track—but I wouldn’t make an itinerary for every minute of the trip. That would take all the fun out of it! In the same way, I get up every morning, look at my plot summary for the chapter I’m working on that day, and I know what I have to accomplish—but I can have fun making up all the details of the story as I go along. The benefit of writing a plot summary is that I can work out all my plot problems before I ever put pen to paper. That’s a lot less painful than writing 300 pages and realizing you’ve written yourself into a corner!

Thanks for the tip on writing a plot summary!

3) How do you manage your work day to allow enough time for writing yet do the marketing necessary to sell books you have already published?

That’s a very, very tough question. There’s no end to what you can do to market your books, and that’s what makes juggling the time demands so difficult. I try not to mix the two activities—when I’m writing, I write, and when I’m marketing, I market. I’ve been trying to consign most of my marketing activities to one day a week, but that doesn’t work for interviews—you have to take those whenever they become available.

4) You and your wife, Joy, have some non-fiction books, can you tell us about them?

Joy and I have written two books on conflict resolution in marriage, and they’re both being repackaged and rereleased in July. One is called Fight Fair: Winning at Conflict without Losing at Love, and the other is called One of Us Must be Crazy…and I’m Pretty Sure It’s You. Fight Fair is about style of conflict (how we fight), while Crazy is about substance (what we disagree about). Fight Fair shows couples how to decide on their own personal rules for conflict, while Crazy identifies seven fundamental differences that are the underlying source of most of our conflict in marriage. Both books are from Moody Press.

5) How active is your speaking calendar? And again, talk about time management with being out of town.

I’ve been a professional speaker for thirty years and I still do quite a bit of it. The good thing about writing is that it’s a portable job, so even when I travel I can usually get some time in for research or writing. Time management seems to be the key to everything, especially writing; I’ve met a lot of people who have a passion to write but just can’t seem to find the time to sit down and do it. Personally, I prefer long, uninterrupted periods for writing—it’s hard for me to just put it down and pick it up again.

We are all looking forward to your keynote address at the 2010 ACFW conference in September!

6) You are the official Bug Man. You write suspense thrillers. Tell us what interested you about writing your current release Wonders Never Cease?

I didn’t start writing Bug Man stories because I like bugs—it was just the most interesting character and topic I could think of at the time. I’ve enjoyed writing Nick Polchak, but I don’t want to become known as just the “Bug Man writer.” I like creative stories, wacky characters, clever storylines, and humor—and if I can have those things, I don’t care what the story is about! Wonders met all those criteria. It’s just a fun little story that I wanted to write.

7) Tell us about your next novel coming out?

My next novel is another Bug Man story, which was almost a requirement since I left Nick hanging at the conclusion of Ends of the Earth. The novel will be called Nick of Time and it picks up with Nick and Alena, just as I promised readers it would. Since the book doesn’t come out until next March I can’t tell you too much about it, but I will tell you this: The opening chapter involves Nick and Alena meeting with a wedding planner. Hilarious!

Sounds like a fun book! Thank you for being here today, I appreciate your time. See you at the ACFW conference in September!

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Interview with Carla Stewart (and her debut novel Chasing Lilacs)

Carla Stewart is the 2007 ACFW Genesis winner in historical fiction. Her debut novel, Chasing Lilacs received a 4.5 star review from Romantic Times : “This first-person narrative contains resolute characters and vivid descriptions of a small Texas community in the 1950′s. If her debut is any indication, Stewart has a promising future.” Christian Retailing, May 2010, states “Chasing Lilacs is a page-turner with realistic characters, descriptive scenery and fast-paced action, and will especially appeal to those who recall 1950s’ small-town life.”

Carla is a small town girl, empty nester and a chocolate and coffee lover. She’s also one of the sweetest ladies I’ve ever met!

BACK COVER COPY:

It’s the summer of 1958, and life in the small Texas community of Graham Camp should be simple and carefree. But not for Sammie Tucker. Sammie has plenty of questions about her mother’s “nerve” problems. About shock treatments. About whether her mother loves her.

As her life careens out of control, Sammie has to choose who to trust with her deepest fears: Her best friend who has an opinion about everything, the mysterious boy from California whose own troubles plague him, or her round-faced neighbor with gentle advice and strong shoulders to cry on. Then there’s the elderly widower who seems nice but has his own dark past.

Trusting is one thing, but accepting the truth may be the hardest thing Sammie has ever done.

Carla, thank you for stopping by to chat with us today! I am so excited about the debut of Chasing Lilacs.

1)      Tell us a little about your debut novel Chasing Lilacs.

It’s the coming-of-age story of a young girl who must deal with her own budding adolescence in the midst of her mother’s depression, shock treatments, and eventual suicide. While that is the plot that drives the story, it really is about the power of community and friendships that carry us through difficult times. Because the landscape is a close-knit petroleum community in 1950s Texas, nostalgia plays a major role, and I had a lot of fun bringing out those elements which I hope will make people homesick for their own childhoods.

I adore the smell of Lilacs, probably my favorite flower!

2)      How did the idea for your novel Chasing Lilacs come about?

As a child of the 50s and 60s myself, I have always been curious about those forbidden subjects people whispered about but were too polite to discuss, especially “nerve” problems and shock treatments. What would it have been like if a young girl’s mom had these problems? At the same time, I always wanted to write a story set in a petroleum camp like the one where I grew up. In 2004, I took a solo venture to the camp (which is now a ghost town). A few miles away, I saw the smokestacks on the horizon. My breaths quickened. A lump appeared in my throat. As I approached and later rambled over the vacant ground where my childhood home once stood, wonderful memories washed over me. I knew I’d found not only the setting for my story, but also the theme of the book—the power of community that shapes our lives. And yes, we had a magnificent lilac bush across the street – I love everything about lilacs!

3)      How many novels did you write before Chasing Lilacs? And don’t say it was your first try or I’ll scream – just kidding!

Definitely not my first attempt! My first novel was a mystery where I wrote willy-nilly without any idea of the rules of writing. An editor read it and pointed out some of the major flaws (which were many), but told me I had an engaging voice. That encouraged me to keep writing. My next attempt was women’s fiction, but I only made it to the half-way point and hit a wall. In the meantime, I wrote magazine articles, moved across the state, remodeled a house, and we started life as empty-nesters. That’s when Chasing Lilacs began to bubble in my mind, so that is what I wrote when I resumed my writing routine. The year was 2004! It has taken six years for it to hit the bookshelves.

4)      Fun question: I know you like coffee and chocolate. If you could only have one coffee and one chocolate forever, what would each be?

Coffee and chocolate make a yummy, lovely combination. My current favorite coffee is Sumatra which goes perfectly with a Heath’s English Toffee bar or a Dove’s caramel chocolate (sorry, couldn’t pick just one).

Carla, you have hit on my two favorite chocolate’s as well. Chocolate and toffee or chocolate and caramel – yum, yum!

5)      Do you have another novel written and contracted? When can we expect it and what is it about?

Chasing Lilacs is the first of a two-book contract. My second novel, tentatively titled Broken Wings, has a strong nostalgic thread also, but is the story of two woman in present-day Tulsa who become unlikely friends. I’m very excited about this book. I had a lot of fun writing it, and I think it has a depth and perspective that many people will relate to. It will release in 2011.

Thanks for stopping by my blog to chat. I’ve enjoyed our time together! Heidi

Thank you, Heidi! You’ve given me a chocolate craving just being here, but it was fun visiting with you. God Bless.

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Spiritual Thought – Do we mock Jesus?

In reading Mark’s gospel account recently, Mark 15:16 stuck out to me, the verse where the soldiers mock Jesus. It wasn’t bad enough that Jesus hung on a cross, they felt the need to cast lots for his clothing and mock and spit on Him.

Let me put this into perspective.

When I read the Old Testament, I briefly tell myself I’d never turn to an idol, like the Israelites did (Ex 32), after hearing God proclaim the Ten Commandments. Nor grumble after seeing the miracle of the Red Sea part so that I could walk through on dry land (Ex 14:21). Nor grumble that I wanted meat (Num 11) after receiving the miracle of fresh Manna from God every day for forty years.

Oh wait, I bet if I lived in those times I would have turned to idols and grumbled, just like the Israelites. I’m human and flawed and sinful. You know, every time I turn on the television when I haven’t had quiet time with God, I am putting my needs before my relationship with God. That novel I read at bedtime is an idol if I still have unfinished business with the Lord.

Are those things “mocking Jesus?” No. We have freedom (2Cor3:17-18) in Jesus. But when I chose something above Jesus time and again, I am mocking Him. No one other than He and I know, but I’m still mocking Him. And I bet it hurts as much as the soldiers mocking Him on the cross, if not more because I am one of His sheep.

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Which POV to chose for your novel?

There is no recipe to writing a novel. There are many do’s and don’ts. The thing to remember about writing rules is that you need to learn those rules so that when you break a rule you are fully aware of it.

Whose POV (point of view) do you use for a novel? Whoever has the most to lose! Once you figure that out you have your main character. In a romance you have the hero and the heroine, period. In Women’s Fiction you have more POV’s you can use. Read the type of novel you are going to write and learn from those authors. How many POV’s worked for them?

Make sure that if you use a POV you use it frequently. Editors frown on a new author using a POV two or three times in their novel. Make sure that each POV character has a GMC (Goal Motivation Conflict) chart and that they have character growth. A solid GMC chart makes for a more three dimensional character.

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King of the Jews

All four gospels state that Pilate had a notice prepared that said “King of the Jews” and had it fastened to Jesus’ cross. Many protested this notice, but Pilate stated “What I have written, I have written.” (John  19:22)

I find Pilate an interesting character. If he didn’t believe, or wasn’t seeking the truth, why did Jesus answer his questions? Why did Pilate try so hard to have Jesus released? Why did he have a notice prepared stating that Jesus was the King of Jews – instead of “this man states he is the king of Jews?”

We studied the book of John this year in BSF and when we came to John 19 I perked up. I was interested to find out what the BSF notes stated regarding Pilate. But the notes go along with the common theory that Pilate was against Jesus. Commentaries I have read also agree.

Dr. Doug Bookman, whose life’s work is studying the Passion Week (if you ever get an opportunity to hear him speak on this topic, do so – he is amazing) thinks that Pilate may have become a believer. There are too many things that happened the day Jesus was crucified that make me wonder if this theory is true.

What are your thoughts on Pilate?

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Seven Layer Bars

Preheat oven to 350 degrees

Place one stick of melted butter in the bottom of a 13″ X 9″ glass pan.

Pour 1 1/2 cups graham cracker crumbs evenly on top of the butter.

Pour one can sweetened condensed milk evenly over mixture.

Spread one cup of butterscotch chips then one cup milk chocolate chips evenly over the mixture.

Spread one cup flaked coconut then one cup chopped nuts over the mixture.

Press mixture down with your hand to condense. Cook for 25 to 30 minutes. Let cool before you cut. So yummy and easy! Enjoy!

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The power of praying back scripture

My BSF leader, Angela Vaughn, talked about praying back scripture. If you have a loved one that you are praying for, here is a list to encourage you to do just that!

John 6:44 Father, draw ______ to Jesus.

Matt 13:15 That______’s spiritual eyes and ears would be opened.

John 16:8 That ______ would have and understand God’s attitude toward sin.

2 Tim 2: 25-26 That _______ would be released from barriers and strongholds that hinder faith.

Matt 9:35-38 That godly men and women would befriend ________, leading him/her to Jesus.

Leave a comment to let me know if this list helped you!

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Scene Analysis

If you need help writing a scene, see my scene construction post. Now that you have the scene written, let’s tighten it! For each scene, you must make sure you anchor the reader by answering the five W’s, as Susan May Warren calls them.

  • Who are the players?   (which characters are in the scene?)
  • What is the storyworld (where are the characters – in a park, a cafe, an apartment a hospital?)
  • Where do the characters stand in the book?
  • When is it?
  • Why is the reader there?

Got your five W’s? Now go to the beginning of the scene and

  • make sure you’ve taken every opportunity to add in the five senses
  • go deeper with characters – show the reader, don’t tell
  • Develop the storyworld, little by little

Let’s do another pass for tension and motivation:

  • There needs to be tension at the end of the scene (what is at stake and how can the situation be worse?). Set it up earlier in the scene, so at the end the reader sees how terrible what happened truly is.
  • Fortify the motivations of your characters action/decisions. Establish the motivations for every action and reaction.

Let’s do a final check on this new scene :

  • Do you have a hook (what is at stake?)
  • What does the reader learn (another puzzle piece)
  • What puzzle piece does the reader now know they have to solve?
  • How does the scene move forward or backward?
  • The scene should be between 1200 to 1500 words

Most of this thought process was garnered from Susan May Warren or from the My Book Therapy website (check out their writing articles).

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