Final revision editing

Many are more experienced that I, so here is a quick tip that I used recently when making final editing revisions on a manuscript.

One of the last things to do in editing is to highlight weasel words, passive voice (was/were), general weak verbs, tighten your prose words, and general words that you tend to overuse. But HOW do you do that quick and easy? By finding and highlighting them:-)

For grins, I will search and highlight all WAS words (not case sensitive) to yellow:

  1. In Word, click highlight in the toolbar and select YELLOW
  2. <control>f (for FIND), enter the word “was” in the FIND WHAT field
  3. click on the REPLACE tab, then enter the word “was” in the REPLACE WITH field
  4. click on the MORE button then the FORMAT button, click the word HIGHLIGHT
  5. click REPLACE ALL

Repeat for all other words you want to highlight in your manuscript. Word will replace the letters in a case-sensitive manner.

I took the liberty to use different colors for different types of words: I used yellow for passive voice, blue for weasel words, purple for weak verbs and so on. Then I was able to scan the entire document and replace as needed.

When done editing, hit <control>a then click highlight in the toolbar and select NO COLOR. All the highlighting goes away.

Let me know if this post helped you :-)

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Interview with Lisa Jordan

Heart, home and faith have always been important to Lisa Jordan, so writing stories that feature both comes naturally to her. She has been writing contemporary Christian romance for more than a decade. Her debut novel, Lakeside Reunion, will be released in November by Love Inspired. Her second novel, Lakeside Family, will be released in August 2012 by Love Inspired. Happily married for over twenty years, Lisa and her husband have two young adult sons. When she isn’t writing or caring for children in her in-home childcare business, Lisa enjoys family time, romantic comedies, good books, crafting with friends and feeding her NCIS addiction. Visit her at www.lisajordanbooks.com to learn more about her writing.

Lisa, congratulations on your debut novel, Lakeside Reunion, published with Love Inspired. I just pre-ordered my large print copy from Amazon and am so excited to receive it!

Thank you!! I hope you enjoy it.

Back cover copy: Bed-and-breakfast owner Lindsey Porter prays she won’t run into Stephen Chase when she returns to Shelby Lake. Five years ago, the cop jilted her to marry another woman, and Lindsey fled town. But no sooner does she hit city limits than Stephen pulls her over for a broken taillight. Despite the past, he’s still able to stir up Lindsey’s old feelings for him. Now a widower and single dad, Stephen recognizes a second chance when he sees one. And he’ll do anything to make Lindsey trust in God and take a risk for love—again. Read an excerpt of Lakeside Reunion

I made you a cup of tea and hot chocolate for myself, let’s sit in front of the fire and chat!

Can you tell us where you came up with the plot of Lakeside Reunion?

My husband always wanted to be a cop like his dad, but after we got married, I begged him to give up his dream because I was too afraid for his life. I’ve always regretted it since he’s such a huge supporter of mine. The plot evolved from those choices we made.

What do you think My Book Therapy had to do with your debut novel?

Learning how to craft a solid story through MBT is the reason my book sold. When I realized I couldn’t do anything else with my novel, I asked Susie Warren and Rachel Hauck for help. We brainstormed and they helped me straighten my story spine by digging deeper into my characters and constantly asking “why” until we hit upon their core motivations.

I see on your website that you eloped and I’ve never heard that story, tell us all about it!

Hubby and I dated long distance for 18 months. Most of that time was spent 6 hours apart, but then he received orders 16 hours from me. I went 5 months without seeing him and couldn’t take it anymore, so I moved south to be closer to him. We planned to have a church wedding, but trying to schedule it around his schedule was a nightmare. Three weeks after I moved south, we eloped. We’ll celebrate our 22nd anniversary on the 30th of this month.

Happy anniversary! What do you consider the greatest moment of your writing/publishing career?

If you had asked me this before ACFW, I would have said January 7, 2011 when my agent called with the news that I had sold. However, while I was at ACFW, I called Hubby and learned he was in the middle of reading my book. That was the greatest gift to me—his total support of my career.

That is awesome :-) Onto your revisions from Love Inspired. Only 8 small items to change in your first set of revisions. WOW. What advice can you give to aspiring novelists so they have a short list of revisions as well?

Well, that short list is not the norm! I’m making up for it now. ;) My advice is to join My Book Therapy to learn how to write a solid story. Get inside your characters’ skin and feel what they’re feeling, see what they’re seeing and pour it onto the page. Writing is actually rewriting so revise until you feel it’s the absolute very best you can do at that point.

What advice can you give to aspiring novelists to produce a sound novel that’ll sell?

Join My Book Therapy, believe in yourself and the talents God has given you, have a teachable spirit, and work hard. Read craft books and solid novels from authors like Susan May Warren, Rachel Hauck, Ronie Kendig, Jenny B. Jones, Jim Rubart, Karen Ball, Sibella Giorello…they know their stuff. I learned a lot about craft by reading well-written novels.

Tell us about future books planned.

I just signed the contract for my second novel! Lakeside Family will be released in August 2012 by Love Inspired. It’s the story of Josie Peretti and Nick Brennan— He’s the last man she ever wanted to see, but the only one who could save her daughter’s life.

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!

I’m holding a scavenger hunt and lakeside photo contest to promote my Lakeside Reunion release. Visit my Lakeside Reunion Contest page for more information.

The token for this blog is a set of knitting needles.

What fun! Lisa, thank you for dropping by today :-)

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Set the Scene

Make sure you start the scene on the run – meaning in the heat of the action. Most times, in your first draft, you will meander into a scene. Make sure to keep the reader on the edge of their seat at the end of the chapter as well as the beginning!

Though you are starting with action, you still need to take one short paragraph to set up your scene. The reader needs to know where the character is and what he/she is doing. Spend those couple of sentences with the key elements the character would notice. This is storyworld, Susan May Warren goes into this in more detail here.

After that first short paragraph that you’ve organically wove into the beginning of your scene, trickle the rest of the facts and color in.

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Scalloped Potatoes

Preheat oven.

  • butter
  • 2 cans cream of mushroom soup
  • 2 cans milk
  • 1 to 2 vidalia onions
  • 3 to 4 baking potatoes
  • Use a mandoline to cut the potatoes and onions. Put them in separate bowls.

    Mix the soup and milk together with a whisk in another bowl.

    In a glass baking dish, line with pads of butter. A layer of potatoes then onions then milk mixture, top with salt and pepper. Layer the same way about 3 more times or until you run out of ingredients (add more milk to the soup mixture if you need to).

    Line a cookie sheet that is larger than the potato dish with aluminum foil. Cover the potato dish with aluminum foil.

    Bake at 350 for 1.5 to 2 hrs. Or 400 for 1 to 1.5 hrs.

    When the dish is close to done, take the foil off the potato dish and cook for another 15 minutes to get the top bubbly.

    Serve with ham and enjoy!

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    Colorful Pasta Salad

    • tri color pasta
    • broccoli cut into bite size pieces
    • carrots cut into bite size pieces
    • jar of roasted bell peppers, cut into bite size pieces
    • feta cheese
    • wishbone zesty Italian dressing

    Blanch the broccoli and carrots, set aside. Cook the pasta, drain. Combine pasta and vegetables. Pour enough dressing on top to coat and then mix together.

    I serve this salad at room temperature, so at this point I cover the salad and leave on the counter. Before serving I add the feta cheese and more dressing if necessary. Enjoy!

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    Win an Amazon gift card : Behind the Badge by Susan Sleeman

    Enter to win a copy of Susan Sleeman’s Behind the Badge and a $50 Amazon gift card!

    Susan Sleeman here. Behind the Badge, my second romantic suspense book for Love Inspired Suspense will release on June 6th and in honor of all of you, the readers, I am hosting a special contest on my website for the month of June.

    Let’s face it. Without you, the wonderful readers, books would not exist and I wouldn’t be able to wake up looking forward to a job that is fresh and exciting each and every day. Praise God for this incredible opportunity!

    Now back to the contest. All you have to do is read the excerpt below then go to my WEBSITE and answer the following question. That’s it. You’re entered to win.

    If you’d like to sign up for my mailing list to learn of other contests in the future you can do that at the same time, too. Full contest rules are on the entry page. Remember only one entry per person.

    QUESTION: What item let Russ know the bike was street legal?

    SUSAN SLEEMAN is a best-selling author of romantic suspense and mystery novels. She grew up in a small Wisconsin town where she spent her summers reading Nancy Drew and developing a love of mystery and suspense books. Today, she channels this enthusiasm into writing romantic suspense and mystery novels and hosting the popular internet website TheSuspenseZone.com.

    Her books include Nipped in the Bud, High-Stakes Inheritance, Behind the Badge, and The Christmas Witness. Also watch for the first two romantic suspense books in her Justice Agency series coming from Love Inspired suspense in 2012 and featuring a private investigations firm specializing in helping those who traditional law enforcement has failed.

    Susan currently lives in Florida, but has had the pleasure of living in nine states. Her husband is a church music director and they have two beautiful daughters, a very special son-in-law and an adorable grandson.

    To learn more about Susan visit her website, Facebook , or Twitter.

    Behind the Badge

    “YOUR SISTER IS NEXT!”

    A killer is threatening the life of rookie cop Sydney Tucker’s sister-unless Sydney turns over evidence from a drug bust. But she doesn’t have the evidence. Not that the thug believes her. Now she and the sibling in her care are under the watchful eye of Logan Lake police chief Russ Morgan…but will his protection be enough?

    The killer is closing in, picking off the people and places that mean the most to Sydney. A list that now includes Russ. To protect her loved ones, will she pay the ultimate price-her life?

    The Morgan Brothers – Bk 2

    Love Inspired Suspense June 6, 2011

    ISBN-10: 0373444478

    ISBN-13: 978-0373444472


    READ AN EXCERPT:

    Chapter One

    Gunshots split the inky darkness.

    Deputy Sydney Tucker hit the cold ground, a jagged rock slashing into her forehead on the way down. She reached for her service weapon. Came up empty handed. She’d stopped after work to check on the construction of her townhouse and left her gun and cell phone in the car.

    Dumb, Sydney. Really dumb. Now what’re you gonna do?

    Inching her head above knee-high grass, she listened. The keening whistle of the wind died, leaving the air damp and heavy with tension but silence reigned.

    Had she overreacted? Could be target practice. But at night? Maybe. Hunters did crazy things sometimes.

    Footfalls pounded from below like someone charging through the brush. No. Two people. Maybe a chase. One person after another. A loud crash, branches snapping.

    “What’re you doin’, man,” a panicked male voice traveled through the night. “No! Don’t shoot! We can work this out.”

    Three more gunshots rang out. A moan drifted up the hill.

    Not target practice. Someone had been shot.

    Sydney lurched to her feet, dizziness swirling around her. Blood dripped into her eyes. She wiped it away, blinked hard and steadied herself on a large rock while peering into the wall of darkness for the best escape route.

    Heavy footfalls crunched up the gravel path.

    “I know you’re here, Deputy Tucker,” a male voice, disguised with a high nasally pitch, called out. “We need to talk about this. C’mon out.”

    Yeah, right. Come out and die. Not hardly.

    Praying, pleading for safety, she scrambled deeper into the scrub. Over rocks. Through grass tangling her feet. Her heart pounded in her head, drowning the prayers with fear.

    “I’m losing patience, Deputy,” he called again in that strange voice. “You’re not like Dixon. He had it coming. You don’t.”

    Dixon? Did he mean the man she arrested for providing alcohol to her teenage sister and for selling drugs? Was that what this was about?

    Rocks skittered down the incline. The shooter was on the move again. No time to think. She had to go. Now!

    Blindly she felt her way past shrubs, over uneven ground. Dried leaves crunched underfoot. Branches slapped her face and clawed at her arms, but she stifled her cries of pain.

    “I hear you, Deputy.”

    She wrenched around to determine his location. A protruding rock caught her foot, catapulting her forward. She somersaulted through the air. Her knee slammed into the packed earth and she crashed down the hill. Wrapping arms around her head for protection, she came to a stop, breath knocked out of her chest, lying flat on her back in a thick stand of weeds.

    “So you want to play it that way, do you Deputy? Fine. Just remember, you can run, but you can’t hide. I will find you. This will be resolved one way or another.” His disembodied laugh swirled into the night.

    The darkness pressed closer. Blinding. Overwhelming. Terrifying.

    She was easy prey. Even with her bulletproof vest, a few rounds fired in her direction would take her out. She had to get up.

    She rose to her knees, but pain knifed into her knee, keeping her anchored to the ground.

    Lord, please don’t let me die like this. Give me the strength to move. I need to live for Nikki. She’s only seventeen. She has no one.

    Sydney uncurled and came to a standing position. Taking a few halting steps, she tested the pain. Nearly unbearable. But she could-no she had to do this for her sister.

    Thinking of Nikki, she gritted her teeth and set off, moving slowly, taking care not to make a sound.

    Out of the darkness, a hand shot out. Clamped over her mouth.

    Screams tore from her throat, but died behind fingers pressed hard against her lips.

    A muscled arm jerked her against a solid chest and dragged her deep into the brush.

    God, please, no.

    She twisted, arched her back, pushing against arms like iron bands.

    She dug her heels into the ground, but he was too strong. He kept going deeper into the brush before settling them both on the ground behind a large boulder.

    “Relax Sydney, it’s Russ Morgan,” Logan Lake’s Police Chief whispered, his lips close to her ear.

    Russ Morgan? What was he doing here?

    “Sorry about the hand.” His tone said she was nothing more than a stranger instead of someone she’d known for years. “I didn’t want you to alert the shooter with a scream. I’m gonna remove my hand now. Nod if you understand me.”

    She let all of her relief escape in a sharp jerk of her head. His fingers dropped away.

    “Once the shooter rounded that curve, you would’ve been a goner,” he whispered while still firmly holding her. “Good thing a neighbor reported gunshots.”

    Sydney started to shiver and breathed deep to steady her galloping pulse. Air rushed into her lungs. She was alive, but barely. No thanks to her own skills.

    “You okay?” he asked, his breath stirring her hair.

    “Yes.” She willed her body to stop shaking and eased out a hiss of disappointment in her performance as a deputy. “How long have you been here?”

    “Long enough to hear the shooter claim he’s hit Dixon and is coming after you next,” he whispered again, but urgency lit his voice and rekindled her fear. “This have to do with your arrest of Carl Dixon the other day?”

    “I don’t know,” she whispered back. “I just stopped to check on the construction of my townhouse on my way home from work.”

    “Off duty, huh? Explains why you don’t have your weapon drawn.”

    “I left my duty belt in my car.” She waited for his reaction to not carrying, but he simply gave a quick nod as footfalls grated against gravel.

    “Shh, he’s about to pass us.” Russ leaned forward and drew his gun with his free hand, but didn’t release his hold on her.

    Crunching steps came within a few feet of their location. Halted.

    “Can you feel me breathing down your neck, Deputy? I’m inches from finding you.” He didn’t know the accuracy of his words.

    She felt Russ’s breathing speed up, upping her concern and washing away the brief blanket of security his arms provided. Adrenaline urged her to move. To keep from panicking, she focused on Russ’s unwavering weapon.

    The shooter took a few steps closer. Her heart thumped, threatening to leave her chest. Russ tightened his hold as if he knew she wanted to bolt.

    The shooter spun sending gravel flying then headed up the path.

    As his footsteps receded, she tried to relax taut muscles. The warmth from Russ’s body helped chase out her fear and the chill of the night. Thank God Russ was here. If he hadn’t come.

    She refused to go there. God had watched over her. Provided rescue, just not in the form she’d have chosen.

    Not only was Russ an officer from the city police force-a team often in competition with the county sheriff’s department where she worked-but a man she’d had a crazy crush on in high school. A man whose rugged good looks still turned women’s heads.

    She let out a long sigh.

    “I know this’s awkward,” he whispered, “but hang tight for a few more minutes. We need to wait for him to head back down the hill.”

    She wanted to protest and suggest they flee now, but not Russ. He thought clearly. Taking off now gave the killer the advantage of higher ground, making them moving targets. They’d have to sit like this until he passed them again.

    If they made it out of here, which the approaching footfalls told her wasn’t at all certain.

    They pounded closer. The shooter moved at a quick clip this time as if he thought she’d gotten away and he was fleeing. Or maybe he was heading to her car to lay in wait for her.

    As the footsteps receded again, she felt Russ’s arm slacken.

    “Time to roll,” he whispered. “Stay here.”

    “But I-”

    “You have a backup?” He referred to a back up gun officers often carry.

    She shook her head.

    “Then wait here.” He gave her the hard stare that’d made him famous around town and crept toward the path.

    She leaned against the boulder and wrapped her arms around the warm circle on her waist where he’d held her. Without his warmth, she couldn’t quit shaking. The reality of the night froze her inner core.

    She should listen to Russ. Lay low. Wait until he apprehended the killer.

    That was the safe thing to do.

    The easy thing to do.

    The wrong thing to do.

    Not for everyone, but for an officer of the law, letting a shooter escape without trying to stop him wasn’t an option. Even if that shooter had her in his sights, she’d make her way to her car for her gun and help Russ stop this maniac before he hurt anyone else.

    *****

    Near the ditch, Russ came to a stop and fought to catch his breath. Taillights on a mud splattered dirt bike roared up the trail. He’d warned the suspect to stop, but short of shooting him in the back, Russ couldn’t stop him from fleeing into the dark.

    At least he’d accomplished his primary objective. To protect Sydney and keep her alive. Now he needed to alert his men and the sheriff’s office to the suspect’s whereabouts.

    He lifted his shoulder mic and ordered a unit from his office to stake out the end of the trail for the motorcycle and an ambulance in case Dixon survived. Then he asked dispatch to patch him through to the county sheriff’s department to make sure they knew he’d taken charge of the scene so none of their hotshot deputies arrived with the hope of usurping control.

    He turned on his Maglight and headed up the hill. The beam of light skipped over gravel and lush plants lining the winding path. Midway up, rustling brush stopped him cold. He’d left Sydney higher up. Nearer the lake.

    Was a second shooter hoping to ambush him?

    He flipped off his light and sought protection behind a tree. His breath came in little pulses in the unusually cold air for a typical Oregon fall. Adrenaline with little time to ebb away came roaring back, but even as the noise grew louder, he resisted the urge to take action.

    Maybe it was Sydney. The Sydney he used to know wouldn’t have listened to his directive and stayed put. She’d trounce down the hill, her chin tilted at the same insolent angle as when he told her he didn’t return her crazy crush her freshman year of high school. Not that he’d wanted to send a beautiful, lively girl like her away. He could easily have dated her, but he was four years older, in college. With their age difference, it wouldn’t have been right.

    Bushes at the path’s edge shook then parted. Slowly, like a sleek panther, Sydney slipped out. He watched until she stood tall on those incredibly long legs he’d admired since she was sixteen before lowering his gun and aiming his flashlight at her.

    She jumped. Peered up at him, an impudent look planted on her face. This was the Sydney he’d known as a teen and heaven help him, in less than thirty minutes, she’d sparked his interest again.

    “Care to shine that somewhere other than my face.” She perched her hand over her eyes, warding off the glare.

    He moved the light but not before he caught a good look at a gaping wound running from her hairline to eyebrow, covered in congealed blood. He lifted his hand to check out her injury, but stopped. He wouldn’t probe a wound on one of his men’s faces. As a fellow LEO-law enforcement officer-he wouldn’t treat Sydney any differently.

    “I told you to stay put.” He infused his words with authority.

    “I wanted to help. Wish I’d listened. I tripped over the body.” She held out blood-covered hands. Her eyes watered as if she might cry.

    Man. Don’t do that. Don’t fall apart. He couldn’t remain detached if she started crying. He’d have to empathize, maybe give her a reassuring pat on the arm. Maybe feel her pain and resurrect all the reasons he’d left his homicide job in Portland.

    He changed his focus. Nodded at the brush. “Show me the body.”

    As a faint whine of sirens spiraled in the distance, she limped into tall grass, a grimace of pain marring her beautiful face. He followed, illuminating the area ahead of her. About ten feet in, she suddenly stopped. He shone his light a few feet ahead of her.

    Diffused rays slid over a young male lying on his back. Russ swung the beam to the man’s face landing on open eyes staring into the blackness above.

    Sydney gasped and swung around him. She rushed toward the main path. Even though Russ knew it was a lost cause, he bent down to check for a pulse. No question, this man hadn’t made it and no question about his identity. Carl Dixon, a man every LEO in the area knew from his frequent blips onto the police radar and the most recent arrest for selling drugs.

    All that ended with three gunshots to the chest at close range from what Russ could see with his flashlight. Once they thoroughly processed the scene, he’d know better. But first, they needed to vacate the area before further contaminating the scene.

    He found Sydney near the path, gaze fixed in the distance, hands clasped on her hips and exhaling long breaths as if trying to expel what she’d just seen.

    Haunted eyes peered at him. “He’s dead, right?”

    “Yeah.”

    “And what about the killer?”

    “Couldn’t catch him. He took off on a dirt bike.”

    Disappointment crowded out the fear on her face. “Did you at least see him?”

    “From the back. He was my height or a little taller, but lean. Wore a black stocking cap. The bike has a plate so it must be street legal. I caught the first few digits.”

    “That’s something, then.”

    Russ didn’t want to tell her it would do little for them in terms of searching DMV records as three digits would return thousands of bikes, but he didn’t think she could take any more bad news so he kept quiet. “Let’s head down to the parking lot.”

    He gave her the flashlight and urged her to take the lead down the steep hill. Once on solid concrete, she handed it back to him. Holding it overhead, he watched her closely for dizziness or other impairments from her fall. He saw nothing out of the ordinary, but a head injury could mean a concussion. He’d have the EMT’s check her out when they got here.

    He pointed at a rough-hewn bench. “Maybe you should sit down.”

    “I’m fine ” Her voice cracked and she seemed embarrassed over reacting to the murder.

    “It’s okay to be upset, Syd. A horrible thing happened tonight.”

    “I’m fine really. I’ll be back to a hundred percent by morning.”

    Text copyright © by Susan Sleeman

    Permission to reproduce text granted by Harlequin Books S.A.

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    Kindle Review

    I adore my Kindle! Mine is black (could not find my version for sale anymore). The WiFi version allows me to use the internet at home. Since I make my purchases at home, I decided to save the money and not get the 3G version. I am pleased that I made that decision, wonder why? Because Amazon offers a ton of free books :-) I use my computer to purchase the free books and the next time I turn my Kindle on, the books are downloaded. I have over 200 free books right now to chose from!

    I purchased the Kindle cover with a light. Absolutely the best choice I made. In the evening, it makes the screen so easy to read and doesn’t stress my old eyes out like a paperback seems to do lately.

    What if you make a mistake and purchase a book on the Kindle that you didn’t mean to? The NEXT screen asks you if you really meant that :-) So great since the arrows are a challenge to use sometimes.

    The font size can be made larger or smaller with the click of a button. Nuff said.

    The Kindle is so small and portable that you can take it everywhere. Just slip it in your purse. I have found that I have read probably twice as much this calendar year because it is so easy to take with me. And because you can’t easily flip ahead and decide when to stop reading, it is fairly easy to stay up later than you expected because there is no good stopping point – the plot and characters are too good!

    FREE books. I browse Amazon weekly to see what is free out there. I browse on my computer rather than the Kindle, because I can see the publisher and reviews much quicker on my laptop than the Kindle. Anything I might want to read one day gets purchased for free. You might be thinking that 200 books is way too many. You are right, I’ll probably never read them all. But I have choices. And if I finish one book I have many more to choose from.

    Over 200 books, how do I organize them? In COLLECTIONS. I have twelve collections (contemporary, non-fiction, secular-fiction, fantasy, historical, suspense, classics, YA, admin, games, previously-read, have-not-finished). What is admin? The files that Amazon sends on the Kindle functions. Previously-read? They are novels that I have read. I could delete them because Amazon saves a copy for me, but I’ve made it into a collection for ease of use. Have-not-finished. When I try new books, if they don’t grab me I give myself the luxury of not finishing them. I simply move them into this collection. Perhaps one day I will return to them.

    Anything I’d like to see different? Many words have a space inserted randomly in them–that is  something you would not see in a paper book. But I love it so much, I try to overlook the errors and just enjoy :-)

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    Common location for all phone numbers

    Where’s that doctor’s number? Or the local Pizza Hut? Or even that neighbor you met last month?

    Instead of having a family and friends phone list or phone book, make it larger–make it a three ring binder with tabs :-)

    Tab ideas:

    • Family (even addresses if you like)
    • Friends
    • Neighbors
    • Business acquaintances
    • Bunco group or Bible Study group
    • children’s school contacts
    • Babysitters
    • House contacts (gutter cleaner, landscaper, power washer, plumber, carpet cleaner, pest services, appliance repair people, HVAC folks, painter)
    • restaurants (take out as well as sit down)
    • Doctors (list Doctors for all family members (make notation of hours for pediatricians) as well as Dentists)
    • personal yellow pages (any store that you’ve ever called, local florist, library, animal hospital, hairdresser (for all in the family). Any phone number you look up to call once – you will call again, so note it!)

    By organizing your phone numbers, you won’t have to search for a number ever again. They will all be in your handy three ring binder by the phone.

    If this post has helped, let me know!

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    Book Review : The Art of Romance by Kaye Dacus

    I adored The Art of Romance. Kaye Dacus is a masterful storyteller, simply wonderful :-)

    Product description : Two crazy grannies scheme to untie their artistic grandchildren. When twenty-eight year old Dylan Bradley, a former steamy romance illustrator, meets Caylor Evans, he’s trying to build up a new professional reputation while recovering from a bad breakup with an older woman. Meanwhile, thirty-four year old Caylor, having once written titillating romances under a pseudonym, now pens inspirational novels. When they form a professional alliance and Caylor’s manuscript is paired with Dylan’s proposed sketches for its book cover, suspicions arise. Can Dylan and Caylor discover the true art of romance while hiding secrets from their past?

    The Art of Romance grabbed me from the first page and held me captive until the last. Kaye has a way creating three dimensional characters that are so flawed and so likeable. The plot she weaved was very simple, yet felt complex. I loved the dynamics between the three friends : Caylor, Zarah and Flannery–I wanted to be their fourth friend! And the grandmothers, Sassy and Perty. They mettled yet it was clearly out of love, so the characters didn’t mind in the end.

    If you are looking for a great romance, pick up The Art of Romance!

    Disclosure of Material Connection: As an influencer, I received this book free from Barbour and the author. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own.

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    Interview with Nicole O’Dell (Part Two)

    She writes. She talks. She reads. She changes diapers. Nicole O’Dell is a mom of six–including a set of toddler triplets who may or may not be potty trained sometime in 2011. Jury’s still out on that one. She is the author of a bunch of YA books, including the popular Scenarios for Girls interactive fiction series and the upcoming Diamond Estates Series, 10/11. She’s also the host of Teen Talk Radio at www.choicesradio.com. You can find her books and links to all the fun social stuff at www.nicoleodell.com.

    Welcome back Nicole! Thanks for chatting yesterday–and coming back today :-) When you sit down to write – do you have the scene down pat in your head or do you just write and see what happens?

    Yep.

    It’s different every day. Sometimes I know where I’m picking up from the day before and I intend to start there and keep moving forward. Other times something else will scream at me, and I’ll have to write that down first. The key for me is be flexible and go with it.

    I am fascinated with this radio show that you do! Tell us what it is about and when we can hear you.

    Oh! Teen Talk Radio is so much fun! I’ve been doing it for almost a year and have loved every minute of it. I get to talk to exciting guests about fun topics and heavy issues. At Teen Talk Radio, it’s all about choices! Big or small, major or minor, there’s a moment before every decision when a teen can alter the course of her life. We cover topics like peer pressure, dating, purity, drugs, alcohol, modesty, popularity, the future, and anything else that comes up.
    It airs live at 10pm EST at www.choicesradio.com where you can also peruse the past podcasts and download any of interest to you. The show is also available as a podcast on iTunes here.

    In October you have a new series called Diamond Estates, tell us about that!

    Diamond Estates is a new series I’m doing with Barbour. The first book, The Wishing Pearl, releases on 10/1.

    Sixteen-year-old Olivia Mansfield can’t wait to escape the confines of her home, which promises nothing but perpetual torment and abuse from her stepfather. When poor choices lead her to the brink of a complete breakdown, Olivia comes to a crossroads. Will she find the path to ultimate hope and healing once she moves into Diamond Estates?

    Diamond Estates is modeled after my own experiences at Teen Challenge, a residential facility for troubled teens. This is the book of my heart—I’m so excited about this one and the two others to follow in 2012: The Embittered Ruby and The Shadowed Onyx.

    Another new series, Drama Ensues, is set to be released in June 2012. What age group is this new series targeting and what is it about?

    Drama Ensues is a fun series that tackles the issues in a completely different way. There’s even a website and blog in place already. Check it out at www.dramaensues.com and keep watch as it develops over the next year.

    Book one, The Understudy is a Ventriloquist, will release June, 2012, and is the story of Jayde Henrick, a driven teen with a message–and you’re going to hear it one way or another. She volunteers at the crisis pregnancy center, authors a blog, and acts in school plays.
Books two and three of this series are planned to release in quick succession.

    You are one busy woman and I applaud you for that! Thank you so much for your time today, it was fun :-)

    Thank YOU, Heidi, for the fun interview!

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